Merge pull request #1 from ApolloZhu/PULL-17

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Author: LiulietLee

README.md

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@@ -79,12 +79,12 @@ in the calculator case, it's the brains of the calculator,
 
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-it's the thing that calculates, tha's the model,
+it's the thing that calculates, that's the model,
 负责计算的那个部分就是模型
 
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-and tha's a UI independent part. It's what the app is,
+and that's a UI independent part. It's what the app is,
 和 UI 是没有关系的。仅仅是背后的逻辑
 
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-How it displays is the controlle's job. So
+How it displays is the controller's job. So
 决定如何展示的是 Controller，控制器
 
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 reaching in and messing with this controller's model. So
-controler 里面的 model 实例
+controller 里面的 model 实例
 
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@@ -3619,8 +3619,8 @@ modifies this CalculatorBrain. So this method,
 
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-perfomOperation, also needs mutating in front of it,
-所以 perfomOperation 方法需要增加 mutating 关键字
+performOperation, also needs mutating in front of it,
+所以 performOperation 方法需要增加 mutating 关键字
 
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@@ -6134,7 +6134,7 @@ if I have to do that, all of a sudden, I'm feeling like,
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 this whole table business really didn't buy me that
-这个列表并不是那么能吸引我
+这个列表并不是很好的设计
 
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@@ -6174,7 +6174,7 @@ It's not really working out for me.
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 Okay, so how are we gonna fix this? Well, we're gonna use
-那怎么改正呢？其实，我们要用到
+那要怎么做呢？其实，我们要用到
 
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@@ -6259,7 +6259,7 @@ needs to be at the beginning. So, we're going to
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 replace this open curly brace with the keyword in, and
-然后把左大括号替换成关键字 in
+我们把左大括号替换成关键字 in
 
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@@ -6349,7 +6349,7 @@ this. Swift also knows that this returns something.
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 So we don't need return, okay. Swift also will let you have
-所以不需要写 return。还有，不论又多少个参数
+所以不需要写 return。还有，不论有多少个参数
 
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@@ -6474,7 +6474,7 @@ it here. We just using as the associated value, but imagine
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 it as function, parameters and things like that. It's,
-你可以想象一下，把闭包当作函数或参数使用
+你可以想象一下，把闭包这种函数当作参数使用
 
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@@ -6549,12 +6549,12 @@ if not a little bit better design point for
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 classes. All right, the last thing that I wanna do here.
-最后要解决的是
+最后要做的是
 
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 Let's go back to our simulator. Is talk about
-让我把模拟器调出来
+（先让我把模拟器调出来）
 
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@@ -6684,7 +6684,7 @@ that as the device changes, that block of stuff, gets
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 stretched out, or whatever. And the stuff inside,
-那一整坨会自动伸缩把界面填满
+那一个部分会自动伸缩把界面填满
 
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@@ -6709,7 +6709,7 @@ I'm gonna add one more button which you need for
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 your homework anyway. Which is a dot button. One of your
-反正是你们作业里要有的——小数点
+反正是你们作业里要有的：小数点
 
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@@ -7029,7 +7029,7 @@ Okay, so I'm gonna use the blue lines, actually, to put
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 this at the proper space on the left edge and top.
-放置在左上角合适的位置s
+放置在左上角合适的位置
 
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@@ -7072,7 +7072,7 @@ the top? And, and really it's talking about the outer edge.
 这里主要是指外层
 
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+01:20:26,860 --> 01:20:28,626
 And you can try and make them the same width, or
 你当然可以选择 Equal Widths 等宽
 
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 So let's go back and check them all. We got fill equally,
-让我们再都检查一遍。
+让我们再都检查一遍
 
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 and I'll see you then. >> For more,
-下周三见。
+下周三见
 
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