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Clarify the difference bt the "save", "connect", and "save and connect" buttons when connecting to your cluster on Compass.

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Thanks for this update, @amalhotra-mdb! I've left two suggestions for your consideration.

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Click :guilabel:`Save` or :guilabel:`Save & Connect` to navigate to the
|compass-short| :ref:`Home Page <compass-home-screen>`.
Click :guilabel:`Save`, :guilabel:`Connect`, or :guilabel:`Save & Connect`
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[suggestion]

Consider rephrasing as: "To navigate to the |compass-short| :ref:`Home Page `, click :guilabel:`Save`, :guilabel:`Connect`, or :guilabel:`Save & Connect`."

|compass-short| :ref:`Home Page <compass-home-screen>`.
Click :guilabel:`Save`, :guilabel:`Connect`, or :guilabel:`Save & Connect`
to navigate to the |compass-short| :ref:`Home Page <compass-home-screen>`.
The :guilabel:`Save` button saves your connection and closes the modal without
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[suggestion]

Consider bulleting these out for improved scannability.

@amalhotra-mdb amalhotra-mdb requested a review from jmd-mongo March 12, 2025 15:21
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Thank you for these changes, @jmd-mongo ! Changes made, back to you!

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Thanks for these changes, @amalhotra-mdb! This one LGTM at this point.

Thanks,
Joe

@amalhotra-mdb amalhotra-mdb requested a review from lerouxb March 12, 2025 18:32
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Hi @lerouxb , could you take a look at this PR for an external review, when you get a chance? Thanks!

@amalhotra-mdb amalhotra-mdb merged commit f6b8cb8 into mongodb:master Mar 13, 2025
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