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@porag-m06 porag-m06 commented Jul 22, 2023

Live Demo:

Video Presentation:

Highlights

  • GeoDB Cities API for retrieving cities with latitude and longitude selected.

  • Air pollution API: for air quality data selected.

  • Home page search added by city name.

  • Tests added.

  • Retrieved data from API stored in the store.

  • Unique route for each page.

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@porag-m06 porag-m06 changed the title Style test setup React capstone project - Metrics webapp Jul 22, 2023
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Hi @porag-m06,

Good job so far!
There are some issues that you still need to work on to go to the next project but you are almost there!

Highlights ✔️

  • React application works as expected ✅
  • Application uses redux library for state management ✅
  • Good video presentation ✅
  • Pull request has a descriptive title and summary ✅
  • Git flow is used correctly ✅

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  • I think it would be better if you fix the error on your Live demo, once you deploy your application online you need to make sure that it works the same way it did when developing (the home and detail page works as expected). I would like to suggest that you try deploying the application using Netlify or GitHub pages if deploying on render gives an error. Please see this link on how to deploy a react application on Netlify using GitHub

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  • [ Required ] I think it would be better if this part of your design is consistent with the design provided on Behance.net, currently, it differs from the design on Behance in the following ways.

    • The details list on Behance is zebra stripped background whereas the design on the details list on your design uses only one solid background color.
    • The details list items on the Behance design have padding around them whereas on your design the details list items have no padding around them.

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I would like to suggest that you try and match the design for this view as much as possible.

Behance design Your design
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  • [ Required ] This comment is related to the redux/features/geolocations/geolocationSlice.js file. I would like to suggest that you delete the commented code on line 49, this is because commented code makes a project look unprofessional and is widely considered as a sign of code that is not clean. Please see the screenshot below and rectify this.

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Hi, thanks for the feedback. It has been removed. :)

@porag-m06 porag-m06 requested a review from Felix45 July 23, 2023 16:04
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bellom commented Jul 24, 2023

Hi @porag-m06,

This is a manual review

Approved 👍

Cheers and Happy coding!:clap::clap::clap:

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