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  • OS X has not been called that since 2015, fixed it for you.
  • Logical separation of code blocks
  • Etymological fixes; namely requirements and prerequisites really stood out
  • Removed general fluff and rumbling

Considering this aims to be a serious technical document, the tone and style of writing do not really suit it. thus:

  • Third person removed where applicable
  • English does not posses a "royal we" as called by linguistics(Think french on for example, thus first person plural should be avoided), thus has been removed from sight and replaced with passive voice where applicable to exude the correct tonality.

Removed the horrid `$` that destroy the whole point of copy, paste functionality. Its a relic of the past.
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This is a serious technical document and the language used should reflect that.
Requirements is defined as: Conditions or capabilities that must be met; Prerequisites is defined as: Something that must be completed or possesed **before** something else can begin. How the hell did this book get past the publishers to begin with? Has nobody bothered to proof read???
- macOS has not been called OS X since 2015; this is a joke
Passive voice and third person used where applicable.
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I will add a flake.nix as well for dev-shells and a justfile to simplify the whole build/test process. The repository as is, has been configured to work with lorri and direnv.

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